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# 761
06-15-2012, 03:54 PM
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Originally Posted by marhawkman View Post
Do you do reviews for incomplete missions? I have a half-finished mission and I'm interested in hearing if you think it'd be worth finishing.

TAS Redux
author: Marhawkman
allegiance: Federation
ST-HRJMDNQIN
Estimated time: 20-30 mins
Description: Journey into the Dark depths of space in search of the missing Federation Freighter the Bonaventure-C.
Hi Marhawkman,

I have no specific rule against reviewing a mission you consider being half complete. It is up to you the author if you think it is ready for review. If you submit it to the queue then I will review it. If it is a half complete mission and you let me know ahead of time then you are less likely to get “You need to finish this mission” from me in the review.

Having said all that, thanks for the review request. You are currently 14th in the queue behind Skyline45. I hope to get a start on the queue tomorrow morning and get as far as I can before the weekend is done. I most likely won’t get to your mission until at least next weekend, but you never know.

Thanks for authoring,
Brian
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# 762
06-15-2012, 07:10 PM
Ah, cool. At least this one is short.
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# 763
06-16-2012, 07:59 AM
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Originally Posted by marhawkman View Post
Ah, cool. At least this one is short.
I look forward to playing it.
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# 764
06-16-2012, 08:21 AM
Phew, lucky I played through the mission with a fleetmate yesterday... left a TON of bugs still roaming (ignore the Klingon ships spinning in place in Qo'noS if they're still doing that, i have no clue as to what to do)

Edit: Note that the warp cores I used to design the engine room are completely out of alignment. I am fully aware of the issue and plan on resolving it if I find the time and need to do so.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Maziken
I would greatly appreciate a review of my newest mission!

Title: The 14th Rule of Acquisition
Author: Maziken
Faction: KDF
Description: "The Empire has recently come into possession of Romulan holographic technology. Can you assist with the research and development of this technology so that the Empire has a decisive advantage over their enemies?"

This mission is sort of a sequel to "Federation Desperation" but one does not need to have played that mission in order to play this one.
Klingon Mission - The 14th Rule of Acquisition
Author: Maziken
Allegiance: Klingon
Project ID: ST-HS7UNE5YT

----------Report Start-----------

Summary: This is an excellent mission with great map designs, tough glorious battles, and excellent story dialogue. The last battle was very tough and I would not want to try it on Elite level but otherwise I would highly recommend this mission to all Klingon faction players.

Below are just a few things I noted while playing the mission that I wanted to let you know about. Everything in this write up should be seen as suggestions on ways I felt you could improve certain elements of the mission. They are yours to do with as you see fit.

Mission Description: This is an intriguing and well written description. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this description.

Grant Mission Dialogue: This is a good grant dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue. I noted one item to consider changing:
-Consider changing "You are ordered to visit the facility" to read "You are ordered to report to the facility".

Mission Task: Despite the fact that you put the start location of the first custom map in the description and grant dialogue you should also put it in the initial mission task. I noted no spelling errors with this task.

Mission Entry Prompt: This is a good use of the prompt. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this prompt.

MAPS:
Research Facility: This is a good map design. The story dialogue is very well written. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue. I noted one item to consider changing:
-There is an NPC that is wandering right in front of the "Computer Translator" console.

Proving Grounds: This is a great map design with some nice battles. The story dialogue is very well written. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map. I noted one item to consider changing:
-They are all labeled "Jackal Mastiff". Is this intentional?

Xarantine System: This is a good map design with a glorious battle. The story dialogue is very well written. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

Secret Facility: This is a great map design with some tough but glorious battles. The story dialogue is well written. I noted one item to consider changing:
-Post 2nd holodeck wall in corridor dialogue; consider changing "Sir, I'm readying a large energy signature ahead" to read "Sir, I'm reading a large energy signature ahead".

Secret Facility Redux: This is a good map design and the story dialogue is well written. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

Xarantine Space: This is a great map with a very tough glorious battle, but I would not want to try it on Elite. The story dialogue is well written and a great wrap up to the mission. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue.

---------End Report----------

Thanks again for authoring and for giving me the chance to review your work. You did a great job with this mission and it was fun to play. I look forward to playing/reviewing more of your work in the future.
Brian

This critique report also filed 06/16/2012 on forum posting for: The 14th Rule of Acquisition.
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# 766
06-16-2012, 06:23 PM
Hey evil70th. I know my mission is coming up in queue but I recently unpublished it to do some polishing so I was wondering if I could just switch my missions that I have in queue?
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# 767
06-17-2012, 12:39 AM
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Originally Posted by Skyline45 View Post
Hey evil70th. I know my mission is coming up in queue but I recently unpublished it to do some polishing so I was wondering if I could just switch my missions that I have in queue?
I'll be starting on the mission One Too Many by XR-377 in the morning followed by your mission The Wave Empire Ep.1. So you would like to switch that mission with The Wave Empire Ep.2 correct? If so I do not see a problem with that, and that is what I will do unless I hear otherwise from you.

Thanks for the heads up.
Brian
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# 768
06-17-2012, 07:44 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Evil70th
I'll be starting on the mission One Too Many by XR-377 in the morning followed by your mission The Wave Empire Ep.1. So you would like to switch that mission with The Wave Empire Ep.2 correct? If so I do not see a problem with that, and that is what I will do unless I hear otherwise from you.

Thanks for the heads up.
Brian

Yes, thats exactly what I was wondering and wanted. Thank you so much! ^.^
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# 769
06-17-2012, 09:04 AM
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Originally Posted by Skyline45 View Post
Yes, thats exactly what I was wondering and wanted. Thank you so much! ^.^
Thanks. I'll be getting started on the queue here in a few minutes.

Brian
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# 770
06-17-2012, 10:14 AM
So unless I missed something, my mission is now 5th in the queue?

[Not that I'm getting impatient or anything. One, it already has more than enough reviews to show up in the mission search engine; I've even played it twice myself. (Same toon, two different ships.) Two, I won't be making any major changes to it until the Season 6 Foundry enhancements go live anyway. So, take your time.]
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