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Wow, great job so far everyone! When I was creating this challenge, I was wondering if I was stretching out the background story too much and if it was too over the top. Looks like you are enjoying it, though. /phew
I decided to go for a more "lower decks" feel with my entry. It stars my Doffs, which I have slowly began to fall in love with now that they have names, and is based on the back-story I made for a tac officer on my main's ship.
I also went with not explaining how the ship got FuBar'ed. I figured it didn't need a rehashing and was just as fun if left open.
I couldn't make up my mind what I wanted to write. I wanted to do a story from the perspective of bridge officers, and then one from Kim's. So, I wrote both, and with a few cameos of other captains of mine (Captain Bain and Vai).
Don't worry, Soral and Kala made it off Deck 4 alive.
I made my story more post fight and that it was a sneak attack. My story focuses on the hard decsion to sent shuttles with the crew on board and to leave a skelton crew including the captian knowing that his ship could go at anytime but not wanting to abandon it to fate.