This is the comments thread for Literary Challenge #11 : Hidden Agendas.
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Let's get those creative juices flowing!

life-entities?

that sounds an interesting one.

ill try and make something up between my foundry creating.

i will think on this.

Another 'different' approach. My female gorn ship/hologram had her being implanted into a recently dead Gorn borg drone. Mirmulnir also had his body upgraded with a borg cybernetic network so she wouldn't feel weird. it in turn helps him by letting him integrate with his Kits better, as well as give him the borg augmented strength, speed, eyesight all in special implants made by the KDF. If you need an example, imagine the Biotics from Mass effect, only replace it with borg tech.

Put up an entry.

It shows how indecisive my captain can be, how stubborn and temperamental he can be, his mannerisms very much mirror my own.
This also plays off his backstory, as he mucks up a great many things that don't involve tactics, and the connection he shares to his senior staff, whom he has served with for a long time.

I have intentionally left a great many holes in the details of what happens on the surface, to signify some sort of event occuring that is not to be disclosed for some reason (the exact reason I know, but to disclose it is to break it, thus making it unsuitable. Choose your own reason )

Yours I enjoyed. Always like a little mysterious conspiracy.

My captian in this has just come fresh off of the betreyal of his Second officer who was found out to be Section 31. I didn't put a lot into the story because I'm Reflecting how my captians state of mind is. This one while it is diffcult to understand has Kligons in it.

I need to start doing more of these, that was actually kind of fun.

I had to look this one up for more info.

For any who are interested or didn't know exactly where the origins are: Camus II, land of body-swapping