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Literary Challenge #12 : Intruder Alert
This is the comments thread for Literary Challenge #12 : Intruder Alert.
We also have an Index of previous challenges HERE.

Feel free to link directly to the entry you are commenting on. And please remember: we're not here to tear each other up. Do not troll your fellow Captains, give feedback! Let the others know what you liked and disliked. Maybe they can even go back then and tweak their entries!

Let's get those creative juices flowing!
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# 2
02-07-2012, 04:08 PM
This post has been edited to remove content which violates the Perfect World Entertainment Community Rules and Policies. ~Alecto
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# 3
02-08-2012, 07:20 AM
Yay! I made the first entry!
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# 4
02-09-2012, 08:56 PM
So I was working on a story for the last one, but for some reason I didn't have the ability to post in the forums until after it was over.

Turns out the direction I was heading tied in nicely with this one, so I used it as the backstory for what is going on here.
It actually makes up a good bit of the first Captain's Log entry.

Anyway, this is my first entry here, but hopefully the first of many.
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# 5
02-10-2012, 01:48 PM
as a side note to my stories i should Probably include the fact that in game my character IS Donovan Wraith but he was designed to not be the captain. He just takes his name from the Captain since he's more of a father figure.
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# 6
02-10-2012, 04:00 PM
Just thought I'd say that I really enjoyed this challenge. I'm half tempted to make my story into a Foundry mission... with some tweaks it could work quite nicely IMO.
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# 7
02-12-2012, 06:01 AM
Can you make the answer to the challenge where the character gets some loot but has to pay the Ferengi some points just to open it?
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# 8
02-14-2012, 06:42 PM
Again, y'all continue to blow me away with your stories. Keep up the great writing!

Cheers,

Brandon =/\=
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# 9
02-14-2012, 06:48 PM
My story is still in the works. It's going to be a lengthy entry, but i hope everyone enjoys it.
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# 10
02-16-2012, 02:03 PM
Got my story finished. It's in four parts ( 1, 2, 3, and 4 ).

This was an interesting challenge. I had fun with it. Sorry about the length, but I do hope everyone enjoys it. Thanks for reading!
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