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Literary Challenge #14 : Facility 4028
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# 2
03-06-2012, 10:17 PM
Can anyone find any references to Facility 4028 outside of STO, or is it specific to the 2800 episode alone? I've searched but have come up with nothing from prior episodes. I want to make sure before I pull another "Camus" blunder again and go way off script/canon.
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# 3
03-07-2012, 11:14 AM
is there a detailing of the mission i can read so i can read the prisoner names and crimes etc

its hard to remember all that detail and i want to be as close to the original as possible.
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# 4
03-08-2012, 05:30 PM
Mine is up, I thought I'd break from the norm and have Krovennan deliver the report in a more inquisitorial fashion, it is obvious such a breach in security of the apparently best protected facility in the Federation would bring up some serious questions.

Again, feedback people, its no fun to be ignored.
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# 5
03-08-2012, 07:10 PM
I'm guessing not as i couldn't find anything either, although in all fairness i only looked at the first google page before saying "oh shiny!" and roaming off into the wilderness. I'm going to have to look up a list of the extra characters as well to do some possible name dropping for the story. If i find one i'll link to it here.
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# 6
03-09-2012, 10:23 AM
This is the best i could find.
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# 7
03-09-2012, 11:49 AM
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Originally Posted by Captain Butters
This is the best i could find.
Yeah, that's what I found too. Ok. Thanks for checking. Time to get scribblin'!
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# 8
03-11-2012, 04:10 AM
I'm going to have to wait until monday to write mine out. This one didn't seem like it was all that great to me which is weird seeing as i usually like tying mine into what ever is going on in game. Did any one else think that or was it just me? Either way, i'm curious if i will be able to write a story that i'll be pleased enough to post on this one.
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# 9
03-12-2012, 02:51 AM
Posted mine. What you didn't see was the wreck of an officer once the report was complete.Its hard to transcribe klingon rage and fury in an official report.
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# 10
03-13-2012, 12:48 PM
Just posted mine. Highlights my Captain's(and my own) lack of finesse with the written word, with a tender moment between him and the Chief Medical Officer.
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