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encountering only humans or Klingon's? My captain is Caitian; so would it be encountering the same race as your captain?

Good point! Edited

Cheers,

Brandon =/\=

well my story is up, hopefully it's enjoyable and not too obvious. Either way, feel free to give me feedback.

And mine's done.
I made an alt who was a sentient Orion Entertainment Hologram mostly as a joke, and, well, she's developed into something more now.

Got part of mine up, it'll be a multi-parter, like the old Cadet one we did long ago (I suggest some people read that one, its my favourite one that I've put up so far and I was writing 50k words in about an hour at 3am, so it was very much a labbour of love). Why is it a multi-parter? Because I just love writing big epic stuff too much.

Now, feedback please people, I do a lot of writing like this and I consider one of the things I'm most comfortable doing, so I'd like to know other's feelings on what I write.

Second part is up, for the song that features in it, I took inspiration from this adaptation from the Phoenix Wright games (for those who would like to put some context to the song):

Magical Link of Clickableness here!

Third Part, I'm buzzing now! Its been so long since I've been able to really go nuts with this kind of thing, and now that I've got an outlet, I've found myself typing more than I thought I would.

One more part should do it, there might be a small fifth part, but I don't know.