I can't work out if I'm happy with it, I mean it's the story I wanted to tell but...I don't know, I'm my own worst critic. Please if you have the time to read it let me know what you think.
Obviously on the page there's a link to the prelude story.
I've been thinking about if it were a TV series who the cast would be, mainly because I like to visualise my stories. I was thinking so far:
Oded Fehr as Oren Hassan
Ty Olsson as Dean Matthews
Mark Hildreth as Vance LaMarche
Saemi Nakamura as Izumi Shimura
Russell Tovey as R'Kal
and for recurring characters:
Eddie McClintock as Paul Walker
Patrick Kilpatrick as Ranul Keru
Ciaran McMenamin as Seamus Flynn/Emergency Holograms