Lt. Commander
Join Date: Jun 2012
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# 1 My First KDF Mission
07-10-2012, 12:47 PM
Ok today I published "The Rights of the Many" based on what I know about Klingons... which is practically nothing.



Actually I did a LOT of research for this and I would like some more rave reviews like the one I got today. Now word of warning; there is a Q&A session in this mission. If you miss one question wrong it will loop. Just think of "honor" and you should get through it.

Well that is about it... ok so go play "The Rights of the Many" and remember since this is the only KDF mission I wrote you can search my user ID sandukutupu which is rather unique.
-Wendy Black

KDF mission of honor and intrigue.
Lieutenant
Join Date: Jul 2012
Posts: 81
# 2
07-10-2012, 06:43 PM
Just played it and kept looping in the trial, but then I noticed you have Capt. Wendell Schwartz look sad for every correct answer I gave. lol

It was a good mission I plan to play it again later. Mainly want to see more of the wrong answers.
Rihannsu
Join Date: Jun 2012
Posts: 392
# 3
07-11-2012, 11:01 AM
I'd say it comfortably earned 4 stars

Also, I never had any looping - guess I know my Klingon
Lieutenant
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# 4
07-11-2012, 03:52 PM
Some of the poor answers are pretty funny. What I liked was she was able to cast the Federation for what they are and I am almost certain those people who gave it 1 star were just lousy Federation Pa'Taks.

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I like the children running about when I entered the village. I don't see children playing in the Cryptic missions and she was able to add the element. This makes it more real. At first I thought the villagers were running around scared but then I saw the word Child and then noticed they were the only ones running about.

I think the trial chamber and the mine was well made. Simple without a lot of clutter. The maps were used for more than just the one event. Unlike her prior work where she was teleporting me into an interior map building.

I was getting a bit frustrated at the mine with the boss there. But then I suddenly realized, I didn't need to kill him to move on. So I got my men to distract them while I went in behind them.

I don't know if these are mistakes or bloopers, but in the very last battle the duck blind is completely gone. Then after Pr'sho orders Vy'kah to be arrested she is still standing beside him at the end? What gives with those 5 letter alien names? Everyone is Bt'laa or is that a title or what? These minor things I mentioned didn't have any effect on enjoying the mission so I gave it 5 star.
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# 5
07-11-2012, 09:37 PM
I gave it 4 stars plus a 25 Dilithium tip. I really enjoyed this mission and it is great to see some quality KDF community missions come out. I enjoyed it very much and would love to see you make some more KDF community missions. I think you've also inspired me to perhaps give some of my own a shot.

Fantastic work and a great story.
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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Jun 2012
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# 6
07-12-2012, 09:22 AM
Thanks everyone for the kind word and support.

@majesticmsfc: I will continue making missions as long as I have slots I hope to review yours soon too.

@blargskull: I really don't know why the platform disappeared. It is still there on my map but gone when I run it. Could be object limit? I really don't know. If I can't get it to show up, I might say the Feds dismantled it.

The alien name system is this; Rank Personal Sex.

Bt'laa is the same as Chief, Leader, Mayor, Ruler, or King.
Tw'nee is Guard, Police, or Soldier.

Vz'too Wy'den Gr'hoo mean Shopkeep Wy'den Female. Gr'hoo is like saying Mrs. before a name they say it at the end. the GR is hard sound and hoo is just the way an owl sounds. As for each name having 5 letters well my name has 5 letters too. I have a lot more lore on these aliens and I do plan on using one for my next KDF character.
-Wendy Black

KDF mission of honor and intrigue.
Rihannsu
Join Date: Jun 2012
Posts: 392
# 7
07-12-2012, 10:23 AM
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Originally Posted by sandukutupu View Post
The alien name system is this; Rank Personal Sex.

Bt'laa is the same as Chief, Leader, Mayor, Ruler, or King.
Tw'nee is Guard, Police, or Soldier.

Vz'too Wy'den Gr'hoo mean Shopkeep Wy'den Female. Gr'hoo is like saying Mrs. before a name they say it at the end.

That's really clever
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