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# 9491
09-10-2013, 09:48 PM
*The voice booms in Sander's head loudly as one of them approaches the his aura and eyes golden...*

General: This one understands so little. His cells are falling apart... A most painful way to die.

Useless humans.

*The aliens detect the defect in the scans but do seem to know the problem and clean it up to understand it.*

*OOC: They aren't fixing it just cleaning up the samples so they can better understand.. Yes there is some linking to what Stane had done with the Gholas except Archangel. Now he has a new batch coming too.*

Degeneration caused by experimentation... Primitive.

There is no saving this one... he won't survive the process to be of much use.

Lock him in a pod with the colonists. Prepare him for ascension with the rest of his kind.

*The Alien next to him puts him back under with a strong dose of a sedative and a complex to ease its passing in his system. As Sander's eyes close they close the table he is on and soon sleep comes back to him..*

*Elsewhere the shuttle arrives back with the station. Patrick welcomes them back but wonders what they need.*

Patrick: Welcome what do you folks need?
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# 9492
09-10-2013, 10:35 PM
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Originally Posted by chrisedallen89 View Post
*The voice booms in Sander's head loudly as one of them approaches the his aura and eyes golden...*

General: This one understands so little. His cells are falling apart... A most painful way to die.

Useless humans.

*The aliens detect the defect in the scans but do seem to know the problem and clean it up to understand it.*

*OOC: They aren't fixing it just cleaning up the samples so they can better understand.. Yes there is some linking to what Stane had done with the Gholas except Archangel. Now he has a new batch coming too.*

Degeneration caused by experimentation... Primitive.

There is no saving this one... he won't survive the process to be of much use.

Lock him in a pod with the colonists. Prepare him for ascension with the rest of his kind.

*The Alien next to him puts him back under with a strong dose of a sedative and a complex to ease its passing in his system. As Sander's eyes close they close the table he is on and soon sleep comes back to him..*

*Elsewhere the shuttle arrives back with the station. Patrick welcomes them back but wonders what they need.*

Patrick: Welcome what do you folks need?
At the station

Firefly : ill have the shuttle refueled and armed is there any thing specific you want for cargo not saying ill do it but ill at least ask
Phil Coulson: And back up isn't coming. It'll be just the four of us. We'll be outmanned and outgunned. But Fury always said... a man can accomplish anything when he realizes he's a part of something bigger. A team of people who share that conviction can change the world. So, what do you say? You ready to change the world?
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# 9493
09-10-2013, 10:49 PM
Sentinel: i will give you one chance to back away and leave

Sinclaire: you should know me better then that

Sentinel drawing a silver glowing blade and a large shield

Sentinel: you where always the bravest and the one to stand up for the week first

Sinclaire grabs his sword as he produces a orange glowing enregy shield on his left arm

Sinclaire: stop this before you doom us all

Sentinel: what i do is to protect these people and give them a chance to survive in a universe that has tormented them every tern

Sinclaire: you only seek to bring back a force you can use to control them

Sinclaire jumps first at sentinel trying to make a first strike but sentinel easily blocks the blow bringing his own weapon to bear which sinclaire has to jump back to avoid.

Sentinel: you should know that you cant hope to stop me alone.I trained you and therefore know you all to well.

Sinclaire jumps at sentinel rolling off his shield and gets kicked mid air by sentinel as he is sent flying into a pile of rubble

Sentinel: I give you a chance to leave now do so and spare us both the pain if you will not listen

Sinclaire jumps up and locks his blade with sentinels as the two hold the position a moment sentinel before sinclaire can even register it moves down low slashing his sword across sinclaires chest cutting into him sinclaire tries to move but then is stabbed through the right shoulder as he drops his sword unable to use the arm as his shoulder is basicaly destroyed. He lets out a scream as sentinel tosses him to the side.

Sentinel: i warned you not to interfere I should kill you know

Sentinel puts his sword back in its holder as he sets the shield aside

Sentinel: may be now you will see that my intention is to help these people even if i must destroy them first.

He gets up and walks away from the wounded and bleeding sinclaire and soon vanishes.

Sinclaire is just barely to open a conduit and crawls through it

OOC: Sentinel does really have the UNSC best interest at heart and you can play on this if you want but they both will live who ever sees this first can decide where sinclaire arrives
Phil Coulson: And back up isn't coming. It'll be just the four of us. We'll be outmanned and outgunned. But Fury always said... a man can accomplish anything when he realizes he's a part of something bigger. A team of people who share that conviction can change the world. So, what do you say? You ready to change the world?
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# 9494
09-11-2013, 01:30 AM
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Originally Posted by logang19 View Post
Sentinel: i will give you one chance to back away and leave

Sinclaire: you should know me better then that

Sentinel drawing a silver glowing blade and a large shield

Sentinel: you where always the bravest and the one to stand up for the week first

Sinclaire grabs his sword as he produces a orange glowing enregy shield on his left arm

Sinclaire: stop this before you doom us all

Sentinel: what i do is to protect these people and give them a chance to survive in a universe that has tormented them every tern

Sinclaire: you only seek to bring back a force you can use to control them

Sinclaire jumps first at sentinel trying to make a first strike but sentinel easily blocks the blow bringing his own weapon to bear which sinclaire has to jump back to avoid.

Sentinel: you should know that you cant hope to stop me alone.I trained you and therefore know you all to well.

Sinclaire jumps at sentinel rolling off his shield and gets kicked mid air by sentinel as he is sent flying into a pile of rubble

Sentinel: I give you a chance to leave now do so and spare us both the pain if you will not listen

Sinclaire jumps up and locks his blade with sentinels as the two hold the position a moment sentinel before sinclaire can even register it moves down low slashing his sword across sinclaires chest cutting into him sinclaire tries to move but then is stabbed through the right shoulder as he drops his sword unable to use the arm as his shoulder is basicaly destroyed. He lets out a scream as sentinel tosses him to the side.

Sentinel: i warned you not to interfere I should kill you know

Sentinel puts his sword back in its holder as he sets the shield aside

Sentinel: may be now you will see that my intention is to help these people even if i must destroy them first.

He gets up and walks away from the wounded and bleeding sinclaire and soon vanishes.

Sinclaire is just barely to open a conduit and crawls through it

OOC: Sentinel does really have the UNSC best interest at heart and you can play on this if you want but they both will live who ever sees this first can decide where sinclaire arrives
*Sinclaire arrives in the veil as a burst of energy prevents the Sentinel from passing, the presence feels familiar but yet Alien.. as the sentinel hears thousands of voices perhaps millions all shout out in anger at him with one louder voice keeping them in mass.*

Firm Voice: There is always a better way..


*OOC: Just thought I would hint more at something happening.. and yes this is an individual.. not going to say who yet...Sinclaire though will be confused though.. and no he is not back.*

*Sinclaire is now enveloped into a healing boon by the veil.. Life energy from this being is powerful... *

Allen's Voice: Rest easy and be well.. He will see soon enough.. My way has this with Harmony and not with destruction... understanding and strength and cooperation..

Now rest. Heal..
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# 9495
09-11-2013, 01:31 AM
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At the station

Firefly : ill have the shuttle refueled and armed is there any thing specific you want for cargo not saying ill do it but ill at least ask
Danny: No we need a ship.. The fastest you have. We also need to have our new friend here oversee the updates to it. We need to get my friend back. As soon as Possible.

Patrick: Are you?


Grey Fox: No he is not kidding. None of us are.
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# 9496
09-11-2013, 03:44 AM
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*Mason gets a ping on his omni tool from a blocked source... *

Garbled voice: Director Mason... ? I work for someone who sympathizes with your gamble and does have an offer for you.
OOC: Quick point to make; the Republic doesn't use omni-tools. That's an exclusively Federation thing. I only did it with alternate universe Sam because the Republic and Federation had merged in that timeline.
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# 9497
09-11-2013, 05:09 AM
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*Citadel, Presidium, Vontral's office*

*Weynal is sitting outside politely as he waits for her meeting to end. *

Aide: She will be with you shortly Admiral.

Weynal: Thank you my dear. I can wait a little longer.
OOC: Well this is awkward. Uh... how can I put this? Vantrelle's a guy.

Anyway...

*Vantrelle walks out of his Office and sees Weynal sitting there.*

Vantrelle: Admiral Weynal. How can I help you?
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# 9498
09-11-2013, 08:14 AM
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*OOC: Or rather disturbing if you think it is good. Have some hint of feelings for her? *

*Gyunei returns as he was watching the Klingons and Markon's search for a cure and source of the disease. *

Gyunei: Why is it that you have a grudge against Sam? Your point of origin?
*OOC: I think that's a little too disturbing for me. It also makes no sense for him to have feelings for Archangel when a) they've only just met and he knows nothing about her, and b) she's a ghola of the woman who killed him.*

Archangel: Not that it's any of your business...

*She starts climbing into he fighter, sitting on the fuselage surrounding the cockpit.*

...but...

I've always hated her. I've hated her since the day I first woke up as Archangel, after all that conditioning. I hate her weakness, her idealism, her naivety...

I'm actually glad to see her snap like this. Firstly because it shows she's actually grown some intelligence and secondly because it gives me an excuse to kill her.

Like I needed one...

I still hate her, though. I hate her for a few very good reasons;

1) As you may have noticed, I'm a psychopath. I won't deny that. D.I.S. needed me to be a psychopath - a cold-blooded killer, but they also needed me to be loyal to the Republic.

I know, the irony of the Republic's greatest foe being focused on their protection?

Allington betrayed the Republic, is responsible for the deaths of innocent civilians...!

2) She got Dr Matheson - one of my creators - killed. The scientists who were responsible for me were like family. Morrison is like a father to me. Matheson was like an uncle.

3) I have her memories. I know why she did this. She did it because she's still a pathetic little targ. It means she hasn't changed.

4) O.S.S. rescued her and, by default, kidnapped me. They put her back in control and killed me. They killed me to save her. That feels like she killed me.

5) I know what my memories must have done to her conscience. I know that she hates me for it. Somehow, knowing that she hates me makes me hate her too.

...correction: hate her more.

Finally... do you know what it's like to have another person in your head, trying to take over control of your body? I could feel her trying to stop me every step of the way. I could hear her saying "don't do it" like some stupid moral compass!

She did all of that. Now, I have an opportunity to kill her.

Again, she betrayed the Republic and is responsible for billions of deaths. I'm going to make her pay for it... and for everything she ever did to me!

*OOC: One of the interesting things about writing Archangel is that she has a ton of Sam's memories and does share certain characteristics of Sam's personality (Sam's temper and capacity for holding grudges, for example) but is still a completely different person. Sam wrestles with her conscience over who she's killed, but Archangel has a clear conscience even with who she's killed. In subtle ways, they're the same person, but those key differences in major parts of their personality make them separate people.

Another interesting thing is that, as we saw between Archangel and Hax, Archangel can take down a highly-trained soldier in about a minute, and brutally. Sam, while she's never actually had to fight someone who's trained that well (though constantly fought her equal in Sam 2), has access to that same training and knows those same moves. She just doesn't use them because of how brutal they are. Sam doesn't like killing in hand-to-hand (not counting the time she stabbed Sam 2) and when she does want to kill people, she wants them to have a chance at beating her too.

There's also the fact that she wants to distance herself from her life as Archangel as much as possible.

Archangel is a really fun character to write because writing her is like writing Sam if she'd gone off the deep end. Also, since I'd only hinted at Archangel's personality, this gives me an opportunity to explore it.
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# 9499
09-11-2013, 10:18 AM
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Danny: No we need a ship.. The fastest you have. We also need to have our new friend here oversee the updates to it. We need to get my friend back. As soon as Possible.

Patrick: Are you?


Grey Fox: No he is not kidding. None of us are.
Firefly: well I have one ship available at the moment. The USS Castle. She should fit your guys bill.
Phil Coulson: And back up isn't coming. It'll be just the four of us. We'll be outmanned and outgunned. But Fury always said... a man can accomplish anything when he realizes he's a part of something bigger. A team of people who share that conviction can change the world. So, what do you say? You ready to change the world?
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# 9500
09-11-2013, 02:23 PM
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Originally Posted by ryan218 View Post
OOC: Well this is awkward. Uh... how can I put this? Vantrelle's a guy.

Anyway...

*Vantrelle walks out of his Office and sees Weynal sitting there.*

Vantrelle: Admiral Weynal. How can I help you?
*OOC: I know he was talking to the aide. *

Weynal: What is wrong with a small visit? I am sure you have been busy recently. I figure to come by and give a bit of levity to all the business.
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