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Literary Challenge #21 : Saying Hello
This is the comments thread for Literary Challenge #21 : Saying Hello.
We also have an Index of previous challenges HERE.

Feel free to link directly to the entry you are commenting on. And please remember: we're not here to tear each other up. Do not troll your fellow Captains, give feedback! Let the others know what you liked and disliked. Maybe they can even go back then and tweak their entries!

Let's get those creative juices flowing!
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# 2
06-12-2012, 10:54 AM
... this Challenge just screams for a Sulu joke....
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# 3
06-12-2012, 10:57 AM
Is this challenge aviable in other languages (german) too?
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# 4
06-12-2012, 11:29 AM
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Originally Posted by VileVillain View Post
Is this challenge aviable in other languages (german) too?
It's not currently but I am working with the EU team to bring it to the FR and DE forums No ETA though.

Cheers,

Brandon =/\=
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# 5
06-12-2012, 04:08 PM
You know, I actually have a good idea for this.

One of my Characters is a Starfleet Academy Field Instructor, and any Cadets assigned to her for their Fourth Year spend the entire year on her ship (an Odyssey Tactical Cruiser), being taught by her and her Senior Officers. And since she is basically a Drill Sergeant From Hell, she tends to run her students into the ground. If they survive the year-long tour of duty, they can graduate without the need for a Final Graduation Exam. And if they Impress her, they might graduate early, and even become permanent members of her crew.

Anyway, she has a tradition of greeting each class as they embark, delivering what is essentially a Commencement Speech. With a few minor modifications, I could probably use one of those speeches for this challenge.
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# 6
06-12-2012, 05:16 PM
Mine seemed short after i'd written it, but I figure that's just something to chalk up to it being an unwanted beginning although i doubt it will compare to my last entry. Some times you're not as thoughtful when you don't want to be there, or in this case, don't fully trust WHY you're there.
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# 7
06-15-2012, 11:46 AM
OK Everyone.. I've just posted my first attempt at creative writing. It's based on a little storyline I keep in my head for my little fleet, Starfleet Academy. Please be gentle
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# 8
06-15-2012, 09:15 PM
I got my entry completed. Give it a read here. I welcome feedback. Thanks.
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# 9
06-16-2012, 07:35 AM
Not my best work, but kind of an idea I had rattling around about the introduction to my title ship.
Ensign
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# 10
06-25-2012, 07:43 PM
So, I guess this edition of the literary challenge is dead? Or should we possibly start a new thread?

Any ideas?

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