Originally Posted by markhawkman

Interested in looking at my contest entry?

http://sto-forum.perfectworld.com/sh...d.php?t=379991

Originally Posted by markhawkman

Mission Title: The Darkness between the Stars
Your @Handle: Marhawkman
Faction: Federation
Level Requirement: 31+
Mission Summary: The Federation has detected weak signals coming from a ship floating through deep space. The signals don't match any known race. From what we've been able to gather the ship is derelict and drifting in deep space. We need you to intercept the ship and examine it to determine if it is safe for us to study.

This is mainly a story driven mission but it does have some combat.



So what did you guys think of it? Be honest, don't worry about hurting my feelings.

Originally Posted by designationxr377

Alright, got two for you. Both... are on the long and dialog heavy side. Considering you'll be digging for all the dialog... uh... really long. Like, I have no idea how long it will take if you go through all the trees for both these mission.

Play through for both of these missions range from 1hour to 3 hours depending on dialog choices so, I'm not sure at all how that will translate for you.

Are you still interested? I have no idea how long your current list is and would hate to throw something like this on you if you would not want to sift through mountains of text.

Originally Posted by designationxr377

Mission Name: The Computer's Daughter
Author: XR-377
Minimum Level: 16+
Allegiance: Federation
Project ID: ST-HAX922V0C
Estimated Mission Length: 1h - 3h
Method of Report Delivery: Forum Post

And:

Mission Name: The Computer's Son
Author: XR-377
Minimum Level: 16+
Allegiance: Klingon
Project ID: ST-HL3FLRFGD
Estimated Mission Length: 1h - 3h
Method of Report Delivery: Forum Post


They're long... moreso for you. But, you may actually be one of the people who see's the full depth of what I put into it. Good luck. You will not loose respect points if you chicken out on it.

Originally Posted by designationxr377

Mission Name: The Computer's Daughter
Author: XR-377
Minimum Level: 16+
Allegiance: Federation
Project ID: ST-HAX922V0C
Estimated Mission Length: 1h - 3h
Method of Report Delivery: Forum Post

And:

Mission Name: The Computer's Son
Author: XR-377
Minimum Level: 16+
Allegiance: Klingon
Project ID: ST-HL3FLRFGD
Estimated Mission Length: 1h - 3h
Method of Report Delivery: Forum Post


They're long... moreso for you. But, you may actually be one of the people who see's the full depth of what I put into it. Good luck. You will not loose respect points if you chicken out on it.

Originally Posted by diogene0

Hey Evil70th, could you add my last mission to your queue? I know you'll give me some good feedback on it.

http://sto-forum.perfectworld.com/sh....php?p=5645591

This post for the delivery method will be perfect. Thank you!

Also, if you have any idea why the first players find it average I'll be glad to hear why. Is it too long? Does it require more optional stuff and more dialog options I really don't enjoy adding? Does it need more or more challenging fights and less dialogs?

Originally Posted by diogene0

Mission title: The Twilight of the gods
Author: @diogene0
Faction: Fed
Level Requirement: 16+
Mission Summary:

A Starfleet transport shuttle crashed on Pico VI. This planet is extrelemy hostile. Starfleet Command orders you to send a rescue team to look for survivors. According to your chief archeologist, your sensors indicate that this planet used to be the homeworld of a prosperous civilization. This might be a good opportunity to learn more about it.

This is a story-driven mission with some challenging fights.

Light on dialog choices and optional stuff, the purpose of the mission is to tell a story and to provide immersion with maps you'll hopefully find good enough.

40-45 mins.

Preview:
http://img15.hostingpics.net/pics/20...0904235406.jpg
http://img15.hostingpics.net/pics/86...0905000034.jpg