Captain
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# 10231
06-24-2014, 03:46 PM
Afraid of a few insane alien vampires, shadow?

I'd really like their uniform in STO though. Both the black and white versions look amazing.
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Rihannsu
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# 10232
06-24-2014, 03:55 PM
they're humans...

less human filth, more furries!
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Originally Posted by pwecaptainsmirk View Post
*reassuringly strokes your hair*
Hush now, you will be back kicking Neelix and killing those nasty Vaadwaur soon enough... hush child.
*pat pat on your head*
epic smirk is epic
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# 10233
06-24-2014, 04:12 PM
Shameless plug: Sifuri, you should play my series.
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# 10234
06-24-2014, 09:16 PM
Hush, my little ones..; you must be exhausted.

Sleep, my precious children
Let the toxin seep in
When the darkest hour comes
You will be the keys

I've been exiled, prosecuted
Left alone without my children.


When I think of what the Federation did to them.
I get a little tense

But I dream a dream so pretty
That I don't feel so depressed
'Cause it soothes my inner kitty
And it helps me get some rest

The sound of Taka and Kovu's dying gasp
M'Sarabi squealing in my grasp
T'Simba and M'Nala's mournful cry
That's my lullaby

Now the past I've tried forgetting
And my children I could forgive
Trouble is I knows it's petty
But I hate to let them live

So you found yourself somebody who'd chase them up a tree

Oh, the battle may be bloody, but that kind of works for me

The melody of angry growls
A counterpoint of painful howls
A symphony of death, oh my!
That's my lullaby

Scar is missing... but Zira's still around
To love these three
Till they accept their destiny
To have their blood soak the ground

Sleep, ya little sacrifices!
Uh-- I mean, precious dear children!
When the darkest hour draws near
You three will be the key

The pounding of the drums of war
The thrill of my mighty roar

The joy of vengeance
Testify!
I can hear the cheering
I'Zira! What a queen!

Payback time is nearing
And then my flag will fly
Against a blood-red sky
That's my lullaby!

Version 4. Went with your advice and changed Ferasan to kitty to keep the rhyme. I tried to see if there was anything else that could be done to match the STO story. Particularly "So you found yourself somebody who'd chase them up a tree"
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Not sure anymore can be done, thoughts?
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Captain
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# 10235
06-24-2014, 11:58 PM
Sleep, my precious children.
Let the toxin seep in.
When the darkest hour comes, ("Comes" could be changed, but it not a requirement.)
Then my time will begin.

I've been exiled, prosecuted,
Left alone without my children.
When I think of what the Federation did to them,
I get a little tense.
(These all need to be redone.)


But I dream a dream so pretty,
That I don't feel so depressed.
'Cause it soothes my inner kitty,
And it helps me get some rest.

The sound of Taka and Kovu's dying gasp,
M'Sarabi squealing in my grasp,
T'Simba and M'Nala's mournful cry,
That's my lullaby!

Now the past I've tried to forget,
And my children I could forgive,
Trouble is I knows it's irrelevant, (That is similar enough to be a passable rhyme.)
But I hate to let them live.

So you found yourself somebody
who'd chase them up a tree.
Oh, the battle may be bloody,
but that kind of works for me.

The melody of angry growls.
A counterpoint of painful howls.
A symphony of death, oh my!
That's my lullaby.

Scar is missing... but Zira's still around
To love these three
Till they accept their destiny
To have their blood soak the ground.

Sleep, ya little sacrifices!
Uh-- I mean, precious dear children!
When the darkest hour draws near,
You three will be the key.
(These all need to be redone.)

The pounding of the drums of war,
The thrill of my mighty roar,

Such ferocity my enemies will have never seen!
Payback time is nearing,
I can hear the cheering,
I'Zira! What a Queen!

The joy of vengeance testify!
And then my flag will fly
Against a blood-red sky!
That's my lullaby!

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# 10236
06-25-2014, 12:02 AM
Thanks for all the help, I shall make the final tweaks tomorrow!!
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# 10237
06-25-2014, 12:19 AM
Sooo.....yeah.... this:

[6/24 11:12] [Combat (Self)] Your Thalaron Pulse deals 126254 (48978) Radiation Damage to Tactical Cube.

[6/24 23:12] [Combat (Self)] Your Thalaron Pulse deals 126254 (48978) Radiation Damage to Tactical Cube. Hehe. Suck it Borg!
[10/8 15:47] [Combat (Self)] Crystalline Entity deals 98082 (147136) Kinetic Damage to you with Warp Core Breach. WUT? I blame Kurland for this and all other problems in STO.
Captain
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Posts: 1,165
# 10238
06-25-2014, 12:51 AM
Shadow, the Ixalens aren't humans, they have antennae and superpowers. And can transform into tentacle monsters.
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Rihannsu
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Posts: 8,273
# 10239
06-25-2014, 06:14 AM
werewolves have supernatural regenerative abilities, can run faster than cheetahs, can lift multi-ton cars like they were made out of plywood and turn into giant, two-legged wolves...they're still humans
Quote:
Originally Posted by pwecaptainsmirk View Post
*reassuringly strokes your hair*
Hush now, you will be back kicking Neelix and killing those nasty Vaadwaur soon enough... hush child.
*pat pat on your head*
epic smirk is epic
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Posts: 10,130
# 10240
06-25-2014, 08:26 AM
Sleep, my precious children.
Let the toxin seep in.
When the darkest hour comes,
Then my legacy will begin.

I've been exiled, prosecuted,
Left alone without my children.
When I think of what the Federation did
I get a little tense.



But I dream a dream so pretty,
That I don't feel so depressed.
'Cause it soothes my inner kitty,
And it helps me get some rest.

The sound of Taka and Kovu's dying gasp,
M'Sarabi squealing in my grasp,
T'Simba and M'Nala's mournful cry,
That's my lullaby!

Now the past I've tried to forgetting,
And my children I could forgive,
Trouble is I knows it's petty,
But I hate to let them live.

So you found yourself somebody
who'd chase them up a tree.
Oh, the battle may be bloody,
but that kind of works for me.

The melody of angry growls.
A counterpoint of painful howls.
A symphony of death, oh my!
That's my lullaby.

Scar is missing... but Zira's still around
To love these three
Till they accept their destiny
To have their blood soak the ground.

Sleep, ya little sacrifices!
Uh-- I mean, precious little things,
When the darkest hour draws near,
Then my legacy begins!


The pounding of the drums of war,
The thrill of my mighty roar,

Such ferocity my enemies will have never seen!
Payback time is nearing,
I can hear the cheering,
I'Zira! What a Queen!

The joy of vengeance, testify!
And then my flag will fly
Against a blood-red sky!
That's my lullaby!


I think this is pretty much the final version.
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