Lt. Commander
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 120
# 1 Ripples In Time
05-03-2012, 08:16 PM


FEATURING: RIPPLES IN TIME

FIVE PART SERIES

SERIES LEVEL REQUIRED: 46+

RIPPLES IN TIME IS A COLLECTION OF EPISODES THAT DIVE INTO THE STORYLINE OF AN ORGANIZATION WITHIN THE FEDERATION KNOWN AS THE FEDERATION SECRETE SERVICE. THE FSS WAS AN IDEA CREATED BY MY SISTER AND I AS CHILDREN, WHEN STARTREK ONLINE BECAME A REALITY WE COULD NOT HELP OURSELVES BUT ROLE PLAY OURSELVES AS THOSE CHARACTERS IN THE FSS.

THESE EPISODES WERE DESIGNED TO TELL A PART OF OUR STORY AS A FLEET, BUT I WOULD LIKE TO EXTEND THE ENJOYMENT I HAD IN CREATING THEM TO THE STO COMMUNITY TO PLAY AND ENJOY. THESE MISSIONS ARE DESIGNED TO TELL A STORY, EVERY STORY HAS BATTLES, BUT THE DIALOGUE IS KEY.

I DEDICATE MY SERIES AND MY MANY HOURS OF WORK INTO THESE AND MY LOVE OF STARTREK TO MY FATHER, THANKS FOR STARTREK DAD, WHERE WOULD ANY OF US BE WITHOUT IT



EPISODE LISTING:


EPISODE 0: PRELUDE

OPTIONAL "LORE" MISSION

GROUND COMBAT: OPTIONAL MINI GAME IN MISSION, LIGHT GROUND COMBAT
SPACE COMBAT: NOMINAL
DIALOGUE: FOCUSED (INFORMATIONAL)

YOU ARE A NEW RECRUIT TO A SECRETE STARFLEET/FEDERATION TASK FORCE KNOWN AS THE FSS (FEDERATION SECRETE SERVICE). YOU ARE GIVEN THE CHANCE TO JOIN THEM AND THIER MISSION OF PERSERVING THE FEDERATION BY COMPLETING IMPOSSIBLE ASSIGNMENTS TO KEEP THE PEACE WHEN WAR IS ALL WE HAVE.

EPISODE 1: KIZMARI

GROUND COMBAT: NOMINAL
SPACE COMBAT: LIGHT
DIALOGUE: FOCUSED

STRANGE ENERY READINGS FROM THE ARIA SYSTEM SPARK CONSERN OF A POSSIBLE UNDINE INCURSION. YOU ARE SENT IN TO INVESTIGATE AND GET TO THE BOTTOM OF WHAT WILL BE AN EVEN DEEPER MYSTERY.

EPISODE 2: RESONNANCE

GROUND COMBAT: HIGH
SPACE COMBAT: HIGH
DIALOGUE: EMBEDDED (DIRECTIONAL/INFORMATIONAL)

AFTER THE ORDEAL IN THE ARIA SYSTEM, YOUR PRESENSE IS REQUESED AT A FSS BASE LOCATED IN THE ARMAGA SYSTEM. THERE YOU ARE TO MEET WITH KEY STAFF AND UNRAVEL A PLAN TO SAVE THE FUTURE OF THE FEDERATION FROM A BRISK ENDING

EPISODE 3: ATTRITION

GROUND COMBAT: INTENSE
SPACE COMBAT: INTENSE
DIALOGE: NOMINAL (OBJECTIVES AND PUZZELS)

THE FSS LAUNCHES AN ALL OUT OFFENSIVE AGAINST A TRUE WAY BASE IN THE PHI SYSTEM. DEFEAT IS NOT AN OPTION AS YOU PUSH THROUGH CARDASIAN LINES AND SECURE NESSECARY ASSETS TO STOP AN ALL OUT TEMPERAL WAR.

EPISODE 4: ARMAGEDDON

GROUND COMBAT: FOCUSED
SPACE COMBAT: TO BE AVOIDED
DIALOGUE: OBJECTIVE FOCUSED

IT IS TIME TO LAUCH OUR CAMPAIGN TO SAVE THE FUTURE. YOU ARE ORDERED TO RETURN TO FSS BASE OF OPERATIONS IN WOLF 359 FOR DEBRIEF....BUT YOU GET A LITTLE SIDE TRACKED ON THE WAY.

EPISODE 5: CIRCULAR REFERANCE

GROUND COMBAT: EXTENSIVE
SPACE COMBAT: EXTREME (DESIGNED FOR 2-3 CAPTAINS, TACTICS REQURED FOR SOLO)
DIALOGE: OBJECTIVE BASED

EVERYTHING IS AT STAKE...WE EITHER DEFEAT OUR FOES OR LOOSE OUR FUTURE AND BECOME A WHISPER IN THE VOID OF TIME

THIS IS A CONTINUING SERIES

EPISODE 6: JUDGMENTS OF AVALON IS LIVE WITH MORE STORY TO BE TOLD.
Ensign
Join Date: Jun 2012
Posts: 6
# 2
06-24-2012, 10:27 PM
update: added alot of dialogue to Kizmari

Episode 7 is live

Episode 8 is in the works
Career Officer
Join Date: Jun 2012
Posts: 183
# 3
06-25-2012, 01:04 AM
I haven't played the missions, yet.

But still one tip: Check your descriptions again, they contain many spelling errors. I think lots of people will be put off when even descriptions contain many mistakes (especially the kind that is more of an oversight than a real error, like "secrete" or "perserving").

You might also want to stop writing in all uppercase letters. I'm certainly not the only one who thinks that this is annoying - it also made me stop reading your descriptions after the first one.

"Sometimes you have to do things that you hate, so you can survive to fight another day."

Last edited by backyardserenade; 06-25-2012 at 01:11 AM.
Ensign
Join Date: Aug 2012
Posts: 4
# 4
08-12-2012, 06:06 AM
I can't start the mission where do i go?
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