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the 2 rare duty officers + 1 very rare i got from my 1st "friendly" contact with the dominion helped me alot with assignments getting thouse "rare" rewards Not to mention my very rare jem'hedar tactical officer

i kinda skipped tru evrything in the beginning to get to admiral lvl before i rly started to play all the side stuff xD

I got a special band with them cause they are the only officers i didnt trade or removed
they helped me out alot and i consider them the moust valuable gift

i hope 1 day to see the gamma quadrant in STO and own a jem'hedar dreadnaught
or maybe include them as playable spiecies

~Disregard~

Done...

For ease of reference/visualization, here're the actors I would cast if I was filming this tomorrow...

Rynar Lambert - Stephen Moyer
S'rR's Kane - Amy Smart
Tal Shiar Operative - Christian Bale
Amanda Palmer - Courtney Cox

[Edit to add]
Audio track - She's So by Royksopp

I had to double check that i had clicked the right thread after reading the first two posts there.....


Either way i look forward to writing this one.

Here is my entry for this one.

Presented a good opportunity to fill in some holes made in previous entries.

As usual, critique & feedback is welcomed/encouraged

Having not read many of your previous entries, it raised more holes than it filled, but it was an enjoyable read

Temporal hi-jinks tend to leave more holes than can be filled , moreso when you forget how to aim

They do indeed, but still, good stuff

@Jenn:
Lovely story, very easy to visualize, and not at all complicated My one hint of disappointment was that it was a holodeck recreation of the event, rather than a 'beam up and away', but equally, it showed that however much time had passed, Mari was still on the Captain's mind, which was equally nice

PS Welcome to the party