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# 101
02-12-2013, 02:43 PM
I think the Ask'kaar could of been manipulated by the Undine to join the war as is members of the Federation (Thay can lias with me) and a rumour that the Breen leaders were killed for some 'unknown reason'.

Plus I always thought it would be cool, if the Borgs interest in the Federation was to MAKE them more technologically advanced by harrassing them... War those cause the largest technological boost! That's why they don't take an interest in the Dominion or the other 99% of the Galaxy...that we know of! Why go hunting for tech when you can breed cattle!?
I can hear the Queen now; "Your small mind is so 2 Dimensional, we have assimilated your ships, we know all you know, but it is just a taste of what lies in the rest of the Galaxy. We are Borg, we have seen every corner of this Galaxy and stepped foot in others as well as other dimensions".
Hell maybe the Defari invasion is simply a plan to make the Federation expand and grow stronger, gaining the technology of the Preservers in the process!?

I got my story sorted, involves a skinney Ferengi, dead diplomats, an undine disguised as a commodore and plenty of space for comments Linking to other stories; "Did you hear about the Ask'kaar cruiser found adrift, all the crew gone, vanished as if they were going about their tasks, boots half polished, food half eaten"!
ATTENTION: UNDINE SPACE & TKON GROUND SETS ALL THE WAY DEVS!.. Q-TRIBBLE, MAYBE!?.. EJECT WARP CORE ABILITY LIKE LAYING A SUPER-MINE, HELL YES!!!.. SPACE HIPPIES FROM TOS PLAYING MUSIC IN OUR FLEET STARBASE, NO, JUST, NO... CAIT & RA'KHOLN ADVENTURE ZONE, YES


Last edited by rickysmith1; 02-12-2013 at 02:51 PM.
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# 102
02-12-2013, 03:10 PM
I have no plans for a Undine-Ask'kaar story board atm....

got a few ideas for the Klingons, Borg...

Klingons - bla bla bla... klingons do stuff for them... they give then X of item Y

Borg - Suffering from a genetic disease that is slowly bringing them to extinction the Ask'kaar science council come up with a twisted idea of allowing an Ask'kaar civilian ship to be assimilated, the Ask'kaar fleet will then intercept this borg vessel, rescue the assimilated victims, then return them home gaining the vast collective knowledge of the Borg.


^^^ and in the idea above you can have your Ask'kaar ship drifting through space.

Last edited by thay8472; 02-12-2013 at 03:12 PM.
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# 103
02-12-2013, 06:00 PM
Ask'kaar Response


Using the Spoiler the Ask'kaar recovered from Nukara prime ("Depths of Nukara Prime" <<<--- another spoiler) the Ask'kaar capture a Jem'Hadar ship being used by the True way.

With mixed opinions on what to use the enemy vessel for the Ask'kaar decide the vessel is of no use, deciding to surrender it to the Federation the Ask'kaar navy using the Spoiler learn the Klingon Empire is planning an attack on the Bajoran anomoly (sp?) realising such an event will result in the deaths of thousands if not millions of lives, The Ask'kaar in their captured vessel decide to launch a scuicidle attack againts Qu'nos.

(Is that the sort of response to the mission you want? or should I tone it down a bit?)


Undine Response

Undine: lol stupid bipeds. ( if anyon wants to take over the undine im willing to surrender it so I can focus on the Ask'kaar)

Last edited by thay8472; 02-13-2013 at 03:29 AM.
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# 104
02-12-2013, 08:26 PM
If you're still looking and can't find anyone else willing or better (of which I'm sure there are many) then I'd be interested in helping out with this project. It sounds interesting. Of course, take a look at some of my previous work and decide if it's the sort of thing you're looking for. If you can't find anyone else interested in doing a Cardassian portion of this project I'd love to help.

My @handle is @xerosarmera - just so that you don't go looking for missions by vexravus. That's just my forum name (problem caused by account linking, still somewhat bitter). I also have a thread with information on all my Foundry work, there should be a link in my sig.

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# 105
02-13-2013, 05:32 AM
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Originally Posted by vexravus View Post
If you're still looking and can't find anyone else willing or better (of which I'm sure there are many) then I'd be interested in helping out with this project. It sounds interesting. Of course, take a look at some of my previous work and decide if it's the sort of thing you're looking for. If you can't find anyone else interested in doing a Cardassian portion of this project I'd love to help.

My @handle is @xerosarmera - just so that you don't go looking for missions by vexravus. That's just my forum name (problem caused by account linking, still somewhat bitter). I also have a thread with information on all my Foundry work, there should be a link in my sig.

-XA
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# 106
02-13-2013, 08:30 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by thay8472 View Post
I have no plans for a Undine-Ask'kaar story board atm....

got a few ideas for the Klingons, Borg...

Klingons - bla bla bla... klingons do stuff for them... they give then X of item Y

Borg - Suffering from a genetic disease that is slowly bringing them to extinction the Ask'kaar science council come up with a twisted idea of allowing an Ask'kaar civilian ship to be assimilated, the Ask'kaar fleet will then intercept this borg vessel, rescue the assimilated victims, then return them home gaining the vast collective knowledge of the Borg.


^^^ and in the idea above you can have your Ask'kaar ship drifting through space.
Sounds twisted, good view of the less advanced civilizations becoming desperate to have the capabilities the major powers have for granted.
I wasn't gonna use the Ask'kaar rumour, its just an example so when people play one after the other they will go "ooh thats clever"

I had another thought about mine, when you learn *spoiler* is an Undine agent and you face him, your suddenly helped by *spoiler* who turns out to be a Founder Spy who with their greater exspierence of spying have started to track nearly every Undine spy on this side of the Wormhole to assess the growing threat.

I'm about to write up my basic story and ideas along with Spoilers so we can all start combining and creating. <<< sounds dirty lol
ATTENTION: UNDINE SPACE & TKON GROUND SETS ALL THE WAY DEVS!.. Q-TRIBBLE, MAYBE!?.. EJECT WARP CORE ABILITY LIKE LAYING A SUPER-MINE, HELL YES!!!.. SPACE HIPPIES FROM TOS PLAYING MUSIC IN OUR FLEET STARBASE, NO, JUST, NO... CAIT & RA'KHOLN ADVENTURE ZONE, YES

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# 107
02-13-2013, 08:39 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by thay8472 View Post
Ask'kaar Response


Using the Spoiler the Ask'kaar recovered from Nukara prime ("Depths of Nukara Prime" <<<--- another spoiler) the Ask'kaar capture a Jem'Hadar ship being used by the True way.

With mixed opinions on what to use the enemy vessel for the Ask'kaar decide the vessel is of no use, deciding to surrender it to the Federation the Ask'kaar navy using the Spoiler learn the Klingon Empire is planning an attack on the Bajoran anomoly (sp?) realising such an event will result in the deaths of thousands if not millions of lives, The Ask'kaar in their captured vessel decide to launch a scuicidle attack againts Qu'nos.

(Is that the sort of response to the mission you want? or should I tone it down a bit?)


Undine Response

Undine: lol stupid bipeds. ( if anyon wants to take over the undine im willing to surrender it so I can focus on the Ask'kaar)
Nope all great
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# 108
02-13-2013, 08:40 AM
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Originally Posted by vexravus View Post
If you're still looking and can't find anyone else willing or better (of which I'm sure there are many) then I'd be interested in helping out with this project. It sounds interesting. Of course, take a look at some of my previous work and decide if it's the sort of thing you're looking for. If you can't find anyone else interested in doing a Cardassian portion of this project I'd love to help.

My @handle is @xerosarmera - just so that you don't go looking for missions by vexravus. That's just my forum name (problem caused by account linking, still somewhat bitter). I also have a thread with information on all my Foundry work, there should be a link in my sig.

-XA
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You are sent to assist an old freind; Miral Paris and a Defari Diplomat to negotiate peace between the Klingon and Cardassian powers before all out war is declared.
However before the meeting begins there is an explosion and both sides are blaming the other.
You are ordered to track the attackers and prevent war before it begins, in the investigation you detect nano-explosives in the blood of one of the Starfleet Security Guards.
With the trail going cold on who supplied the drug or how they invested his blood system, you recieve word from an old freind at Starfleet Academy who has a lead on the supplier, you go to meet his ship but find it destroyed from an internal explosion (sabotage), uploading the Data Recorder you recover a hidden message stating he is a member of Section 31 and they provided him with a name; Ginta, a Ferengi Arms Dealer.

You locate him on one of his Casino Ships and fight your way through the night club before questioning him, you eventually learn that he was paid to feed an unknown substance to a Starfleet Officer that passed one of his Casino Ships a week Earlier.
He identifys the buyer as Commodore Winston, currently in command of a task group along the Cardassian Border.

Confronting the Commodore in private he openly admits everything, along side several Starfleet Captains, that they provided a classified Weapon (nano-explosives) and planned the assination by giving the Defari Ambassador the proximity detonator within a braclet.
That they knew the War would be coming eventually and they simply wanted to trigger it so that the surrounding powers wouldnt be in position to wage war against the Federation.
However when you try to arrest him yo are forced to defend yourself against the Captains and Bridge Crew, he then reveals himself to be an Undine Infiltrator, working on a grand scale plot/plan to weaken the Alpha Quadrent powers.
The surprise doesn't stop their, his Commander reveals himself to be a Founder infiltrator and assists in stoping the Undine. Then once the Founder explains itself it vanishes into the air ducks.

Hours later as you report to Starfleet Command your findings, you are told it was for nothing as the two Fleets are gearing to attack each other at the Santos System, you are sent with command over the Task Group.
Upon arriving you are welcomed by two vaste fleets ready to do battle, each hail and offer for you to join them... which one will you be forced to fire upon? Your choice!?


This is just a brief summary of course. Might Spell Check it later!
Plus I'll re-do the Galactic Map tomorrow so we can keep editing and brain storming the Story.
ATTENTION: UNDINE SPACE & TKON GROUND SETS ALL THE WAY DEVS!.. Q-TRIBBLE, MAYBE!?.. EJECT WARP CORE ABILITY LIKE LAYING A SUPER-MINE, HELL YES!!!.. SPACE HIPPIES FROM TOS PLAYING MUSIC IN OUR FLEET STARBASE, NO, JUST, NO... CAIT & RA'KHOLN ADVENTURE ZONE, YES


Last edited by rickysmith1; 02-13-2013 at 01:45 PM.
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# 110
02-13-2013, 01:56 PM
Ricky's brief story inspired something in me just now...

Remember Deep Space Nine? The Dominion War story arc took a while to start, but eventually it quickened.

Perhaps we could do something similar!

1) The first episode's author creates a conflict. It's small, but has the potential to explode into something much larger. Note that this conflict is NOT the main point of the episode's plot, it's more of a hint.

2) Each author after the first episode: Depicts ONE of the two things:

2a) How the small "conflict seed" affects their chosen faction and its individuals and society, causing their faction to Respond.
2b) How their faction reacts to another episode's Response.

Bam! Pretty soon, a small little, insignificant incident blows up into a major plot idea that can be utilized in the episodes, or even sequel story arcs!

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