It may not be exciting or visually stunning but it does do it's job.

There are a few detail of the game it barely glosses over, but honestly if you were that interested in them you'd looked for and found a manual or the wiki.

You should give the KDF Tutorial a try!

EDIT: Just realized I probably need to clarify. After reading your revamp of the tutorial, I'd be keen on reading what you'd write for the KDF. Kudos for the creative effort so far. Thanks for posting this.