Commander
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BENEATH THE RAPTORS WING
Earth Stands Alone; the Earth-Romulan War has cost millions of lifes and reshaped this part of the Milky Way for eons, but what happens when your ship is used to avert one of the most climatic battles in history into their favour?
Can you alone save the Legends of Starfleets History and restore the Federation before the Romulans conquest of the Alpha Quadrent is realised?
Theme: Temporal & Romulans.





BENEATH THE RAPTORS WING II
You have spent weeks fixing the time-line from damage caused by Valdore and his Temporal Agents.
However when you arrive to the home you left, it isn't to the best of receptions.
It is down to you to break all the rules to find and stop Valdore once and for all before his new Alliance causes untold death and destruction.
Theme: Tholians, Temporal & Romulans.





SERIES FUTURE:
I am saving sequels of this mission for the various Foundry Challenges, this way I don't know where the story will go, but I would like to explore what happened to Valdore's Officers in the next Episode and have a VERY dark undertone of 'vengeance for good'.
Idea for 3rd Episode; A Federation Colony is attacked and the UFP President halts your trial to go deal with this situation.
I also want to do future stories that do the title 'Beneath the Raptors Wing' justice as opposed to being Romulan-Related stories, to explore their Origins and link with the upcoming 'Legacy of Romulus' stories.
Most important of all, I want to eventually explore their Destiny, the Future of the Romulan People from the 26th Century and beyond; [Spoiler].




Ingame Author: rickysmith1
Look out for my new upcoming series 'Star Trek Tempus'and the joint Perception Project 'Dark Frontiers'.
ATTENTION: UNDINE SPACE & TKON GROUND SETS ALL THE WAY DEVS!.. Q-TRIBBLE, MAYBE!?.. EJECT WARP CORE ABILITY LIKE LAYING A SUPER-MINE, HELL YES!!!.. SPACE HIPPIES FROM TOS PLAYING MUSIC IN OUR FLEET STARBASE, NO, JUST, NO... CAIT & RA'KHOLN ADVENTURE ZONE, YES


Last edited by rickysmith1; 06-09-2013 at 07:36 AM. Reason: Updating Information.
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Join Date: Oct 2012
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# 2
04-24-2013, 05:09 AM
Sounds great! I will definitely try the mission when I get home today .
Commander
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# 3 News
06-08-2013, 12:09 PM
I have an outline for Episode 3. This is dependant on Foundry Challenge.



It begins with a distress call from an archeology team, a Romulan Strike Group attacks and steals a Hurk artifact, (Stolen as if they found it in the process of looking for something else, the Hurk device was not the target).
A member of the team that survived the attack, states that they know where their next target will be.
This will lead you on an adventure that will link with the Origin of the Remans and reveal to you the fate of Valdores Officers and that his 'legacy' still continues to haunt this Galaxy.

This will be the first Klingon Faction Story in the series.
You will travel to a long lost Klingon/Romulan Colony, to the first Reman Colony and even have a cameo from one of the Legacy of Romulas Characters, (Likely Tovan Khev).

More information/updates coming soon as I figure out the details. Please tell me what you think.
ATTENTION: UNDINE SPACE & TKON GROUND SETS ALL THE WAY DEVS!.. Q-TRIBBLE, MAYBE!?.. EJECT WARP CORE ABILITY LIKE LAYING A SUPER-MINE, HELL YES!!!.. SPACE HIPPIES FROM TOS PLAYING MUSIC IN OUR FLEET STARBASE, NO, JUST, NO... CAIT & RA'KHOLN ADVENTURE ZONE, YES


Last edited by rickysmith1; 06-09-2013 at 04:38 AM.
Commander
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# 4
06-09-2013, 04:20 AM
I have an outline for Episode 4. This is dependant on Foundry Challenge.



The Romulan Republic Colony at Raptor IV has been destroyed, long range sensors have detected a Borg Cube on a direct course for New Romulas.
Your mission is to stop the Cube and if possible, determin their motives behind this particular target.

This will be the first Romulan Faction Story in the series.
I am also planning to have many cameos from both the KDF and UFP as they try to gain favour through assistance.

More information/updates coming soon as I figure out the details. Please tell me what you think.
ATTENTION: UNDINE SPACE & TKON GROUND SETS ALL THE WAY DEVS!.. Q-TRIBBLE, MAYBE!?.. EJECT WARP CORE ABILITY LIKE LAYING A SUPER-MINE, HELL YES!!!.. SPACE HIPPIES FROM TOS PLAYING MUSIC IN OUR FLEET STARBASE, NO, JUST, NO... CAIT & RA'KHOLN ADVENTURE ZONE, YES


Last edited by rickysmith1; 06-09-2013 at 04:24 AM.
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# 5
06-09-2013, 07:33 PM
Sounds very interesting!

I take it that this mission will stand apart from the PFP?

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# 6
06-10-2013, 03:20 PM
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Originally Posted by stardestroyer001 View Post
Sounds very interesting!

I take it that this mission will stand apart from the PFP?
Yes, Exclusive to Foundry Challenges.
ATTENTION: UNDINE SPACE & TKON GROUND SETS ALL THE WAY DEVS!.. Q-TRIBBLE, MAYBE!?.. EJECT WARP CORE ABILITY LIKE LAYING A SUPER-MINE, HELL YES!!!.. SPACE HIPPIES FROM TOS PLAYING MUSIC IN OUR FLEET STARBASE, NO, JUST, NO... CAIT & RA'KHOLN ADVENTURE ZONE, YES

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# 7
06-17-2013, 10:26 AM
Hi,
I attempted to contact you with the mail-system in the game, but don't know if it went through because I only was able to use @rickysmith1 as the address. Was not able to find the entire address.
I played part 1 of UTRW and enjoyed it very much. I went on to part II and was also enjoying it immensely. I ran into a problem after beaming up to my ship from New Romulus.....I scanned the warp trace cloud and then was prompted to "Follow the Bread Crums". Unfortunately, no matter what I did at that point nothing was triggered to move the story forward. I even took out a few Tholian ships, but it did not make any difference. I even warped out a few times and started that part over again from the beaming up point in front of the building in New Romulus. Don't know if it's a glitch or bug of some kind or I am doing something wrong. Would love to continue with this Part II mission, as you have produced an excellent storyline and the mechanics and maps are great. You can email me in game at t'suris@malek3 or reply here. Hope to hear from you or anyone else that might have some insight into this. Thanks!
Commander
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# 8 Reply
06-19-2013, 01:41 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by malek3 View Post
Hi,
I attempted to contact you with the mail-system in the game, but don't know if it went through because I only was able to use @rickysmith1 as the address. Was not able to find the entire address.
I played part 1 of UTRW and enjoyed it very much. I went on to part II and was also enjoying it immensely. I ran into a problem after beaming up to my ship from New Romulus.....I scanned the warp trace cloud and then was prompted to "Follow the Bread Crums". Unfortunately, no matter what I did at that point nothing was triggered to move the story forward. I even took out a few Tholian ships, but it did not make any difference. I even warped out a few times and started that part over again from the beaming up point in front of the building in New Romulus. Don't know if it's a glitch or bug of some kind or I am doing something wrong. Would love to continue with this Part II mission, as you have produced an excellent storyline and the mechanics and maps are great. You can email me in game at t'suris@malek3 or reply here. Hope to hear from you or anyone else that might have some insight into this. Thanks!

I am sorry to hear there is a glitch with the mission, but as you know, the Devs updates to the Foundry has caused various glitches across the board, if the glitch hasn't solved itself by the end of the 20th (Update), then as soon as the Foundry is back on I will overhaul my missions and post on here when I have finished. Thank you for letting me know and I am glad to know people are enjoying what I have created, I would love to hear your feed-back in-game via my email, although I wont be online till the weekend because of work.
Thank you again.
ATTENTION: UNDINE SPACE & TKON GROUND SETS ALL THE WAY DEVS!.. Q-TRIBBLE, MAYBE!?.. EJECT WARP CORE ABILITY LIKE LAYING A SUPER-MINE, HELL YES!!!.. SPACE HIPPIES FROM TOS PLAYING MUSIC IN OUR FLEET STARBASE, NO, JUST, NO... CAIT & RA'KHOLN ADVENTURE ZONE, YES

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