As with all things in life: If it feels forced, don't force it... There's a difference between revision to make an idea consistent, and simply adding more material without progress... I had to edit LC45 to explain how Amanda could have been beamed off the bridge, when Brandon had already stated that the ship's transporters were down. I just needed to approach it from a different angle to achieve the same result in a consistent way... If a scene isn't quite working, maybe changing characters might help, as different characters behaviour differently, and the way one might address a situation, another will handle totally differently. Maybe even create a new character to do what you need to do... I created two new admirals (and did a logical conjecture of Xon) to oversea the board of inquiry, handled Admiral Tobin in a way I had never written her before (previously always as a younger woman who was rather aloof, but excellent at her job) as well as Channery, who may recur in the future as a nemesis/rival for Amanda... Maybe the scenes you have already need a bridging scene to get from A to C... I'm sure you'll get there
Good advice. I'll simply add something that might help as an aid.
Try to think of your story as it might look as an episode of the Series. Try to visualize how one action leads to another, and don't just look at it forwards. Sometimes if you have a result, but not how it came about, you trace backwards through each of the events you know had to happen for that outcome you want to be viable. Look at your story and see how it would play out on-screen, looking for ways you might criticize it if you were watching it ("Picard would never ask Worf that!"), and then work around each scene with different ways of doing the same thing to see if it can be made to fit.
Also, find some good instrumental music (soundtracks or anything that might sound like the story you want to tell) and put it on. See if you can match up what is happening in your story to points in the music, and then see if the rest of the music gives you any ideas about the missing parts of your story. You might not need a whole movie score, but just one piece of music that can serve as the 'theme' for your story, and thus provide clues for you to build on.
Finally, as said above, don't force the issue. If you've got a writer's block, set the project aside and go do something else. Rest up, and see if anything comes to you while you are busy elsewhere, and if it does, jot it down on a piece of paper for later. When you are ready to return to writing, see if the picture is clearer. Rome wasn't built in a day, and even stories that write themselves take time to crystalize.
Hope this helps!
Edit: Also, if you try everything you can to make the various scenes/events fit and they still don't seem to gel, consider that they might just not be compatable to be in the same entry, and set off one or the others for another chapter/entry/episode later on.
"I am your leader, I am in command. The fate of all my followers lies in my hands. The burden of what is right or wrong, decisions have to be made. I have to take you all into this burning Gate." - Iron Savior, 'Never Say Die'.
Last edited by danqueller; 07-19-2013 at 09:14 AM.