Well i don't have a mission currently published ( damn foundry crashes ) but i'm sure you won't mind if i review your mission anyway
First Off I'm loving the Parodies ( so many to find and i won't spoil them ) , it really appeals to my sense of humor without distracting from the Mission itself.
Wandering about the fair is nice, i think i played it a while back before the republish
Liking the story , Some of the ground combat was a little tough , wasn't expecting such a challenge even with my STF gear equipped
I particularly like the creative use of tailor parts, even more so considoring the limitations of the foundry costume editor
( I know its not the most in depth review , more of a FIRST IMPRESSION, but i am pressed for time, might post a longer one later if you like)
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Found it eventually! My bad, I put an S instead of a 5 in the code. Oops!
The fair segment was cool. Very nice references and puns and a good amount of detail - but without it dominating the story so you can move on when you like. Though I think you're missing a word in the "Ever since UPS?" sentence - but that is the only error I noticed all the way through!
Nice to see pakleds getting a look in, the main bulk of the story was great though would be nice to get a similar level of detail on the Remans as everything else. Clark et al was the main focus, and the Remans seemed almost a distractions at times.
Use of the foundry, especially in space, was very good. I really like the joined-up warping segments that some people use. The Clark Tech campus was a nice change in style though I'd say some segements could do with a little more detail given the bare nature of the walls. Also, some wall areas overlapped producing a flickering effect. Only a minor issue though.
On the whole, a fun play-through that was well put together. I'll take a look at your other missions soon!
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