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# 21
09-06-2013, 09:07 AM
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I challenge everyone to accept this challenge!
I accept such a challenge!

Of course I just started one so....

I still accept such a challenge!
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# 22
09-06-2013, 09:39 AM
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I challenge everyone to accept this challenge!
"I resist that suggestion" - Spock

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# 23
09-06-2013, 10:06 AM
/counterpoint - I reject that quote on the grounds that ... that ... there is no reference when he said it!

Although I did watch Into Darkness yesterday and had fun with it. I'm not a fan of the JJ-verse, but I can still enjoy a good looking movie. And let's face it: Quinto really IS a very good choice for Spock, among other actors.
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# 24
09-06-2013, 11:15 AM
@wraithshadow - yikes. Wesley mk.II is one scary little dude. Lucky for your crew that Wraith is just a little scarier...
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# 25
09-06-2013, 12:37 PM
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/counterpoint - I reject that quote on the grounds that ... that ... there is no reference when he said it!

Although I did watch Into Darkness yesterday and had fun with it. I'm not a fan of the JJ-verse, but I can still enjoy a good looking movie. And let's face it: Quinto really IS a very good choice for Spock, among other actors.
He said it in the ToS episode where he, Kirk and McCoy were hyper-ageing, but Chekov was unaffected. Some commodore wanted Spock to assume command, as given his Vulcan lifespan, he was less affected by the process than Kirk. That was Spock's reply, like a boss But fiiine, I've been inspired to write something, but it's going to be a very loose take on the prompt... Watch this space

As for JJverse... Might get round to Into Darkness when it hits Sky, but I'm not paying a penny to watch it otherwise

@ masopw: Very nice beginning, it'll be interesting to see where you take the story ^_^

@ sander233: Good to see Rusty recovering and getting back to business ^_^

@ wraithshadow: It would have been nice to have seen more of the conversations between the Traveller and the crew rather than a description of the conversations, but very nice entry ^_^

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# 26
09-06-2013, 02:12 PM
Oh snap ... ToS ...

As long as you were inspired

@masopw - you know, there IS room for more on this. At the same time, if you chose to leave it at this cliffhanger, then my hope would be to see some results in a later LC.

@sander223 - This was good stuff! Did I miss that this was a WIP?

@wraithshadow13 - I enjoyed this selection because, although I do agree with marcusdkane concerning dialogue somewhat, the story was presented in a way for me to accept it without the details.
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# 27
09-06-2013, 02:18 PM
I just dropped something in LC #40 under the guise of "Lone Drone" (LC #39)

This is the backstory for Nine of Nine, my KDF liberated Borg PC formerly known as Lan (one of Ssharki's BOffs.) Nine was last seen flying an exploding raptor through a gateway in Part IX of The Road, but he will be the central character in an upcoming prequel story arc I'll be writing with patrickngo.

I hope you all enjoy To Form Again What Lasts

Starring in order of appearance:

Philip Seymour Hoffman as the voice of Col. Ssharki
Ben McKenzie as the voice of Hunter Cmdr.
Cristopher Mintz-Plasse as Wr. Sker
Ben Foster as the voice of Lt. Sway
Lennie James as Cmdr. Lan / Nine of Nine
William Forsythe as Lt. Gokran
Terry Crews as Cmdr. K'mach
Tim Roth as the voice of Cmdr. Maddox
Liev Schreiber as LCdr. Abraham
Ron Canada as Sgt. Risac
Andrew Garfield as the voice of Sgt. Shralak
David Boreanaz as the voice of Lt. T'Rrak
Christopher Walken as the voice of Reader Lt.
Mike Vogelas the voice of Wr. Hrrki
Kevin Corrigan as Wr. Atzik
Franka Potente as Wr. Deiniz
Robert Carlyle as the voice of LCdr. Dou'gal
Meagan Tandy as Naja
Angela Basset as Dr. Tr'vayn
Astrid Berges-Frisbey as Medic Arele Mang
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# 28
09-06-2013, 02:20 PM
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@ sander233: Good to see Rusty recovering and getting back to business ^_^
What'd you think about his secret narcotic dependency?

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@sander223 - This was good stuff! Did I miss that this was a WIP?
No, that's it. Why, do you think its missing something?

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# 29
09-06-2013, 02:22 PM
And boom goes my entry. A direct continuation from the last LC.



Dang Wraithshadow, that Wraith is certainly an ominous dude. I was expecting it to have been Wesley who went mad with power before his reveal.
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# 30
09-06-2013, 04:56 PM
Spacing, it's always the spacing that kills me. The Traveler really wasn't in this as much as i would have like. A directors cut would have definitely had more dialog and more Traveler, but until i know the word limits on the single posts, i can't really just delve into it too deep. That's also why i ended up doing the supplemental, i didn't know how much space i had to expand, but i'd left so many unresolved things that i had to solve in a single paragraph. Aside from that, that last sentence would have really been the best way to end the story.
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