Peering between the lines, I notice you've gone out of your way to mention an event from 2370. This doesn't fit the theme so it must be significant some how. Ro Laren? From the 2nd-to-last TNG episode? I suspect we will be hearing more about her soon...
Ro Laren figures prominently in the post-series DS9 relaunch novels. She takes over Odo's job as chief of security on DS9
I like the story too :-) Are we going to see some of these characters in the game?? Will we see Riker and will he be doing the voice acting for the game? That would be great.. What about Data's twin we all know Date died in the movie Nemesis but what happened to the Date they found on the planet in the movie Nemesis :-)
Keep up the good work :-)