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Literary Challenge #51 : The Brig
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Brandon "BranFlakes" Felczer | Former Community Team Lead for Perfect World Entertainment
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# 2
10-01-2013, 04:01 PM
Oooooh, I so know what I'm going to write for this. It's been too long since I wrote something from the Romulan perspective.
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# 3
10-01-2013, 04:10 PM
Setall - "You have annoyed me for the last time Tovan"

I want an Armored Hatham called Fluffy!
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# 4
10-01-2013, 04:24 PM
This would fit quite nicely with an idea I've been bouncing around for a few weeks. I'll think a bit on it, and see what else presents itself... Really looking forward to seeing what others come up with
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# 5
10-01-2013, 04:45 PM
Oh, this is similar to a story I had in mind. One Night: Bosip's Defiance.


Which, as you may be able to tell by the One Night part of the title, is the same night as Emony's choice. But, I don't think I'm quite ready for writing that story just yet. And since the Sentinel doesn't have a Brig anymore (or anything else for that matter!) I think a jaunt to my Klingon officer is in order. He hasn't been seen since the New York one anyhoo.
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# 6
10-01-2013, 05:34 PM
Ok Bran, you have your first yarn to read. I think I got everything in order.
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# 7
10-01-2013, 05:47 PM
Interesting challenge this time around.

I'll need to see if I can come up with anything--Drawing blanks at the moment, but I'm sure something will come to me...
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# 8
10-01-2013, 07:03 PM
I put in my story too Its my first post on the STO forums, but I think you'll enjoy reading it

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# 9
10-01-2013, 07:43 PM
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I put in my story too Its my first post on the STO forums, but I think you'll enjoy reading it
It played out well I think.
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# 10
10-01-2013, 07:55 PM
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I put in my story too Its my first post on the STO forums, but I think you'll enjoy reading it
Verrry interesting. Good characterization, and an intriguing plot. I think the Temporal Investigation guys will conclude it's a predestination paradox - if the officer hadn't done what he did, history would have been different. The current timeline would require that he take the Kyon through that vortex and trigger the war.

There are quite a large number of issues with spacing, punctuation, and grammar, but the story itself stands.
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