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Literary Challenge #53 : The Gateway
This is the comments thread for Literary Challenge #53 : The Gateway.
We also have an Index of previous challenges HERE.

Feel free to link directly to the entry you are commenting on. And please remember: we're not here to tear each other up. Do not troll your fellow Captains, give feedback! Let the others know what you liked and disliked. Maybe they can even go back then and tweak their entries!

Let's get those creative juices flowing!
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10-29-2013, 04:54 PM
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This is the comments thread for Literary Challenge #53 : The Gateway.
We also have an Index of previous challenges HERE.

Feel free to link directly to the entry you are commenting on. And please remember: we're not here to tear each other up. Do not troll your fellow Captains, give feedback! Let the others know what you liked and disliked. Maybe they can even go back then and tweak their entries!

Let's get those creative juices flowing!
Interesting.

I'll see if I can come up with something for this one.
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10-29-2013, 04:58 PM
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10-29-2013, 06:09 PM
I'm not doing anything major for this, there's too much which could happen, but please enjoy The Road to Hell.

For ease of reference/visualization, here're the actors I would cast if I was filming this tomorrow...

Amanda Palmer - Courteney Cox
T'Natra - Gal Gadot
Selya Chirk - Angelina Jolie
I'K'rR'h - Miley Cyrus
Jac Cheliss - Timothy Dalton
Brandon Mayer - Jason Lewis
S'rR's Kane - Amy Smart
Claire - Lacey Chabert

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10-29-2013, 08:07 PM
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I'm not doing anything major for this, there's too much which could happen, but please enjoy The Road to Hell.

For ease of reference/visualization, here're the actors I would cast if I was filming this tomorrow...

Amanda Palmer - Courteney Cox
T'Natra - Gal Gadot
Selya Chirk - Angelina Jolie
I'K'rR'h - Miley Cyrus
Jac Cheliss - Timothy Dalton
I enjoyed it, and picked up the ball and went a few more yards with it ^.^
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# 6
10-30-2013, 12:31 AM
Kind of suspected this topic was coming, so had a story pretty much ready to go. Just required a bit of minor tweaking.

We're back with Captain Persico of the USS Talon for this one.
I hope to finish the cliffhanger mystery I left Captain Bh'ypiv on, but that might have to wait for another Freestyle or Redux challenge.

Please have a look and let me know what you think. I'm trying a new method of fast-planning my stories and I feel this one might come across as a bit rushed.
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10-30-2013, 03:55 AM
I have an idea for this one. It'll involve Admiral Grylak, the guy who gives orders in my foundry missions, though he's never really been seen or doing anything outside my head. But this is exactly the kind of situation Grylak responds to. However.... I have not done any of the Romulan rep, and as such, I know nothing about this gateway. Could someone give me the rundown of the situation so I know what I'm writing into?

And who are these Dewans I hear mention of?
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A Romulan Strike Team, Missing Farmers and an ancient base on a Klingon Border world. But what connects them? Find out in my First Foundary mission: 'The Jeroan Farmer Escapade'
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10-30-2013, 04:51 AM
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I enjoyed it, and picked up the ball and went a few more yards with it ^.^
Very nice Can't wait to see who picks up the ball next
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10-30-2013, 04:54 AM
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Kind of suspected this topic was coming, so had a story pretty much ready to go. Just required a bit of minor tweaking.

We're back with Captain Persico of the USS Talon for this one.
I hope to finish the cliffhanger mystery I left Captain Bh'ypiv on, but that might have to wait for another Freestyle or Redux challenge.

Please have a look and let me know what you think. I'm trying a new method of fast-planning my stories and I feel this one might come across as a bit rushed.
I wouldn't've said it came across as rushed at all, it was a really solid entry I'm really liking Selene's style
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10-30-2013, 05:38 AM
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I have an idea for this one. It'll involve Admiral Grylak, the guy who gives orders in my foundry missions, though he's never really been seen or doing anything outside my head. But this is exactly the kind of situation Grylak responds to. However.... I have not done any of the Romulan rep, and as such, I know nothing about this gateway. Could someone give me the rundown of the situation so I know what I'm writing into?

And who are these Dewans I hear mention of?
Basically, the situation is that, while exploring a set of underground ruins on New Romulus, you and your bridge crew find a massive geothermal plant used by the previous inhabitants of the planet. That is at T4 rep. At T5, you repeat the same mission, only this time, at the end, you get a cutscene of the gateway rising from a set of hidden floor panels.

The Dewans are the previous inhabitants of Dewa III (which is now known as New Romulus (or Mol'Rihan)) who went extinct shortly after activating the Geothermal plant because the plant wnet out of control and caused the massive cataclysm that resulted in New Romulus not being habitable until very recently.

Hope this helps!
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