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# 231
06-25-2014, 09:36 AM
Added I'Zira's theme song to the main post. This is her main theme and will be used in a future mission.
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# 232
06-27-2014, 09:53 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by ashkrik23 View Post
It is done and I could use some testers.

It should come up as Perfection, Part 2.

This is a level 41+ mission for Federation or Federation aligned characters.
It is a Borg mission so bring a remodulator. Play close attention to the green mission text that helps guide you in certain parts. Please report any bugs, typos, errors, or suggestions you have here, in-game on the reviews, or mail me at @ashkrik23.

Thanks!
One tiny thing to change as far as wording goes would be Taka's wording in his final speech.
He says "future" twice.
Also as I suggested in the comments, please move the respawn point in the final battle with Donatra's ship.
Otherwise, nothing to critique; great mission! Really enjoyed the story and the dialogue options at the end.
Great maps and combat, 5 stars all the way.
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# 233
06-27-2014, 09:57 AM
I will look into those issues as I update the entire series with fixes and adjustments, cheers!
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# 234
06-27-2014, 11:12 PM
I have now begun my remastering of perfection, part 1. I will be going through each map and adding quality of life updates I feel will enhance the experience. I will also be making another balance pass based on user feedback in terms of enemy difficulty.
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# 235
06-28-2014, 11:38 AM
Played scars of the pride, part 1

Hathon
Epohh salesman dialogue should say "stand" instead of "sand"

"Agreed but let's hurry to Taka's office" response used twice in a row between I'Zira and the Away Team Engineer.

When entering Taka's office, the ship science officer shows up in the map transfer dialogue.

Taka's Office
Integrate actual explosion sound with an effects object?

Hathon under attack
No critiques here, liked the Ferasan remodeling and prop placements in the back alley

Ferasan Safehouse
New animation for destroying consoles? Right now it looks as if you kick it to blow it up.

BOFF engineer says "The attack we saw early" change to "earlier"

Captain T'Vitani's 2nd to last dialogue has some sentence fragmentation


Overall, loved the mission! Good story, very dialogue-based, which is refreshing once in a while. Good work!
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# 236
06-28-2014, 11:58 AM
Thanks! I will address these issues on my next update!
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# 237
06-28-2014, 10:59 PM
Played Scars of the Pride Part 2.
Really enjoyed the character of the Claw, looking forward to his development.

Not much to change, just a couple typos:
In "Solving the Puzzle" Second sentence
(On the Simba)

On the Simba Bridge, "Admiral [rank]"

"The Claw Appears":
"Communication gets cut down (use "off"?) befor"

Enjoyed this installment as well, good space fight at the end, and liked the story. 5/5
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# 238
06-28-2014, 11:57 PM
Thank you. This will be applied just like the previous list. I am going through each mission in order and applying a polishing pass.
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# 239
06-29-2014, 04:28 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-sRd...FxJokmnCulX7XQ

Synergy plays through and reviews Scars of the pride, part 2, The Claw.
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# 240
06-30-2014, 08:41 AM
Perfection, Part 1 re-mastering patch notes.

General

Added hints and tips to various character dialogues such as suggesting medics on the ground maps. ETC.

Minor dialogue improvements.

Added music for the Earth battle maps.


Lion 's Pride Bridge


Added optional dialogue to several of the bridge officers, including Commander M'Kiara and 1 of 5. This should provide a little more variety than just speaking with M'Sarabi

Cube section #214

Brought back the original version of the Borg ambush.

Updated many NPCs to wander and perform jobs. Set Borg patrol speeds to normal Borg walking speeds.

Also gave many NPCs new dialogue text when patrolling or engaging in combat.


Cube Section #777


Same improvements from the previous map added to NPCs for this one.

Added a few more Borg scenery objects to fill up the hallways.

Also added a couple of additional scenery objects in the rooms.

Turned one "Mini-boss" fight into an objective. Added a puzzle for objective variety on this map.


Earth Space Dock Under Fire


Added hint about using the tricorder by pressing V to help find the captive officers.

Added wander and jobs to the various Borg NPCs so they do something instead of just standing around.

Gave each Borg group its own combat entry text.

Toned down the final ground boss battle based on user feedback. It is still a good challenge but nowhere near as overkill as it used to be.


Escaping the Armada


Minor dialogue changes.

Updated Admiral Quinn's look to make it more accurate.

I was going to add explosions to ESD, but the transwarp gate is so far away that you cannot see them.

Warp

Added recommended mission list to help promote other author missions in the credits.


Hopefully all these fixes provide a much better experience with perfection.

I will be applying some smaller fixes to my other missions soon.
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