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# 31
12-16-2013, 06:13 PM
Thank you for the very large review. On the subject of the Borg, of course this is a fan fiction so the Borg will not act like the "canon" Borg. In a way the Borg Leaders have become more individualized with the Omega Molecule's power. They still function as a group, but with this extra strength, they could each operate on their own easily.

The forcefield issue with the final ground boss is something I plan to fix in the next update.


The Borg agent would be quite feasible. She technically is a drone, just able to operate on her will like the Queen does.

Honestly I enjoyed the Borg in Voyager hehe. After TNG I wanted more, and that's what I got.


Thanks again for playing and I hope you can spread the word around. I could use any feedback possible to make these missions even better. Glad you enjoyed the story!
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# 32
12-16-2013, 06:50 PM
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Originally Posted by ashkrik23 View Post
The Borg agent would be quite feasible. She technically is a drone, just able to operate on her will like the Queen does.
I hadn't thought about it like that. Bit easier to visualize when you look at it through that lens.

Honestly I liked the Borg in Voyager episodes up to and including Dark Frontier, but I remember being disappointed with the major 2 part episodes after that.
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# 33
12-16-2013, 07:04 PM
A short review by fellow author, Voporak.

Perfection part 2

U.S.S. Simba
-Good map. Lots of detail on it, lots of NPCs, and they talk. Kovu's dialogue is especiall emotional, and the explosion is unexpected.

Kalferi system:
-good design, and the mobs are not to much and not too little.
-That's Admiral Voporak to you!

Cait system:
-lol, so much borgification.
-I like that the mobs are optional, I can use my cloak to evade them.
-Taka's reactions feel very real.

Cait ground:
-Stealth module ftw.

Research facility:
-The Borg parts feel very well integrated.
-the dialogue was real and felt personal, not just like robotic responses.

Cait space, again:
-The battles were good, and killing Donatra was satisfying.

U.S.S. Simba:
-Free cheers!
-The way Taka told Karopov they were going to have a talk was just epic.

The story was great and emotional, and it felt personal. Nice mission!
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# 34
12-16-2013, 09:22 PM
I will be fixing the forcefield issue on the final ground boss tomorrow morning.
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# 35
12-17-2013, 05:29 AM
Patch is applied, shouldn't run into the force field issue anymore.
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# 36
12-17-2013, 06:54 PM
Gonna add the cameo for the next villain in the series that follows Perfection. It will probably be hidden in map 4. (Cait ground).
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# 37
12-17-2013, 08:17 PM
Publishing with the cameo update on map 4. Cait Ground, You will have to explore to find it.
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# 38
12-18-2013, 09:42 PM
Added some dialogue updates to perfection, part 1 and 2 cameos to map 3 of Part 2.
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# 39
12-19-2013, 07:33 PM
Introducing my next series that follows Perfection in this timeline.


This series will expand the story of many characters you met in Perfection. It will be a multi-part series of course. Much longer than Perfection. I haven't worked out the full details of the pacing yet, but I may start part 1 soon. Keep the feedback coming in on Perfection though so I can make sure they continue to be top quality.


All credits go to @Voporak for the logo and the title of the series.
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# 40
12-20-2013, 06:32 PM
I put up both missions for Perfection up on the spotlight waiting list. However if you find a big issue, please let me know so I can fix it.
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